The Best of Mad Swirl : 12.16.17

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“An artist is a dreamer consenting to dream of the actual world.”
George Santayana

••• The Mad Gallery •••

“untitled – (a9)” (above) by featured artist R. Keith.

To see more of R. Keith’s mixed-media madness, as well as our other featured artists, visit our Mad Gallery!

••• The Poetry Forum •••

This last week in Mad Swirl’s Poetry Forum…we refused heaven for fried chicken; we rained on ruins for tourist doin’s; we fought the past for dreams to last; we saved ghost fodder for a new-come squatter; we broke bones in saxophone; we swung through an interstitial commercial; we shunned the game to stand naked without shame. Isn’t that how we came? ~ MH Clay

Hogging the Blanket by David Ratcliffe

She removes her clothing,
cradles the naked girl
shielding her from the cold wind’s bite,
offering love of a different kind.

Knowing critics enter an open window,
indifferent to those observing
selfless intent, through dignified silence.

Those detractors who would
shake a pretty flower
into an ugly stem
to place on public display.

The gutless bastards that would
weave an itchy blanket
from the fibers of an ill-spun yarn
to throw over innocence.

She knows they come,
yet gladly hogs the blanket,
offering the damsel a fresh robe,
before standing bare to those
who see beyond the fabric.

December 16, 2017

editors note: A case where those who stare and deride are the naked ones. – mh clay

Commercial I Wrote by Jeff Bagato

We’re talking putting art
in your mouth and chewing it
but Archie don’t get it;
Archie don’t come down the stairs
to breathe life into ghosts
or fancies; Archie crosses
the street for meat meat
meat and potatoes no matter
how you spell it,
back to our program and
George of the Jungle swinging
in to grab that can
of beer from his hand
and get a few hits
before the producer pulls
the spot

December 15, 2017

editors note: Selling Archie or swinging for beer, it’s all one big station break where we all pay the sponsors – meat and potatoes, baby! (We welcome Jeff to our crazy congress of Contributing Poets with this submission. Read more of his madness on his new page – check it out.) – mh clay

Storyline by Shaan Bagchi

I never thought she would pollinate in my glance
as the chair melted on her breasts, legs crossed,
almond eyes frozen in time and saxophone –
a spec of desire listed as
old school aftershock storyline
— Did I miss the groovy tress, expecting
daffodils will fly with new age rhapsody?

Tattoos blended in subcutaneous tissues with Alice
melting pots stirring up truffles, treasure and epiphany
lessons they teach in meritocracy of unfound truth
that shimmers and fades and silently spreads
just wait and wade through till you find the dots
they were a colored intense polemic
you happy now?

December 14, 2017

editors note: A trick to keep up when story speeds up as words pile up and we line up in saxophone. Nice! – mh clay

In the long run, when do we even live? by Bijaya Biswal

My new apartment has the silence of a graveyard.
But also the respite.

The previous tenant hanged herself from the ceiling.
Blood still drips from the cracks
Like rain in an eternal monsoon.
Some of her things remained.
Gowns with cigarette holes,
Books by Plath, Woolf, Hemingway.
Finger-nail scratches on doors
Echoes in the hallway.

When the phone rings, I suspect
It’s she, calling to ask for something left behind.
Maybe a funeral, an apology, sleeping pills
Things I have started wanting
Now I am assured,
If Nietzsche could be trusted
that God was dead,
It must have been a suicide.

December 13, 2017

editors note: Where is the suicide hotline for gods? – mh clay

Dreams Last Even in War by Linda Imbler

Among scarlet guns,
held in the unrested clench of fists
of tired troops,
in the long, long battle,
dreams last.

Among the fogged schizophrenia
of peace wanted
and war necessary,
within all the fighting,
dreams last.

Among the uncharitable cargo
on the backs of soldiers,
even within the tense disembarkation
of olive drab or navy blue
in all their hearts and heads,
dreams last

even unto the insistent numeration
of the final count.

December 12, 2017

editors note: Our dictators (never dreamers) declare war as our soldiers dream of peace. – mh clay

I can build a wall with one hand by Victoria Valastro

each brick filled with a small vengeance
that prevents the will to tear it down
with both hands
sometimes even my fingers have
split tasks

all walls
but this one
has no gate

love is
let go here

or you will burn
knees and nose to rage
laying more cement

of time

may save
like rain
ruining ruins

the sacred places
will one day
full of tourists


December 11, 2017

editors note: All our pains and past presumptions; monuments we leave. A boon for local tourism. – mh clay

copper angel by Mike Zone

I don’t like the idea of angels
giving me the angle
of Heaven being
the picture-perfect monarchy
basking in cosmic disco lights
strobe getting on high of mind
a conversation
over fried chicken and coffee
honey dipped- crisp
coffee- black
she wore a coat of blue monkey skin
her eyes- purple and red
art lies- Abraham Lincoln
made of pennies
won the prize
it was Armageddon
before we even met
all we left- a pile of bones
on a single plate
hand in hand
bean juice backwash
on the bottom of mugs

December 10, 2017

editors note: Is it heaven, or fried chicken? Not sure? How ’bout I flip you for it? – mh clay

••• Short Stories •••

Happy Need-a-Read Day! This week’s featured short, Actuality comes to us from DL Shirey.

Here’s what Short Story Editor Tyler Malone actually had to say about DL’s online dating tale:

“When we wonder what we’ve become, the next thought will be when will we be become more, then it becomes the last breath that we take.”

And on that wondrous note, here is our “official” tease to get you to read the rest of the story:

(photo “Click It” by Tyler Malone aka The Second Shooter)

Griffin liked to arrive early enough to cruise by the parking lot until a 15-minutes-only space opened. There, he would sit in the car for half an hour, rearview mirror tilted at the coffee shop. The seat belt could be undone in an instant, but first impressions couldn’t.

He’d know her when she arrived, but the women rarely embodied their posted pictures. On the screen, they seemed younger, thinner or prettier. Griffin’s photo was dead-on, updated each time he braved the dating website. He was all about actuality and had grown a goatee since the last time. He hoped the weight of thick, golden hair at the bottom of his face would balance the moussed haystack tufting the top. Griffin tolerated the in-between: a long, thin nose, drawn cheeks and thick-lensed glasses.

The last time he met here for coffee, his date, Angela, joked and called him a beatnik. Griffin couldn’t guess if such an outdated term was an insult or not. Angela said not; said the way he dressed was kind of cute with those old, square, black-framed glasses. “A blond beatnik,” she clarified, “In a good way, I mean,” and went on to suggest the only thing missing from the caricature was a goatee…

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Johnny O
Chief Editor

MH Clay
Poetry Editor

Tyler Malone
Short Story Editor

Madelyn Olson
Visual Editor

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